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๐ŸŽฌ Not Yet, Death

Production Breakdown — Shoot This Week (3–7 Mar) — Dir: Katamelo — 10 scenes, ~8–10 min

Sc.1Room ยท Night
Sc.2Room ยท Night
Sc.3Room ยท Night
Sc.4Room ยท Night
Sc.5Room ยท Night
Sc.6Room ยท Night
Sc.7Ext ยท Coffin
Sc.8Room ยท Dice
Sc.9Room ยท Dice
Sc.10Room ยท Kill
Park AExt ยท Bench
IntConfrontation
Park BExt ยท Final

๐Ÿ“ Locations — 4 needed

๐Ÿ“ View full Location Scout Report โ€” scouted 3 Mar โ†’

LOC-1: The Room primary ~70% of film

Scenes 1–6, 8–10. Raw unfinished concrete room, exposed rebar. Bare incandescent bulb on wire (must swing). Space for table + 3 chairs. Min 5×4m for wide shots. Must black out for night scenes.

LOC-2: Ext. House coffin scene

Scene 7. Outdoor area for coffin + kneeling figures. Simple yard/courtyard. Natural light. Low art direction โ€” coffin is the set piece.

LOC-3: The Park bench + tree

Park scenes. Wooden bench under old tree. Must have depth for Death watching from distance. Shoot golden hour. Darkening as Death approaches (ND filters or time-of-day).

LOC-4: Flashback brief / flexible

Scene 2. Person's traumatic memory. Can be abstract (same room, different lighting) or a quick exterior. Director's call.

๐ŸŽญ Props — 20 items

Core Set โ€” The Room

PropScenesNotesSource
Heavy wooden tableAll roomScarred, aged, rough planks. Central to every scene.rent/borrow
3 wooden chairsAll roomMismatched OK. Simple, no cushions.rent/borrow
Edison bulb + wire (2m)All roomPractical light. Must swing in Sc.10. Warm amber. Filament bulb.buy critical
Haze / incenseAll roomFloating dust particles in the amber light cone. Incense or small haze machine.buy

Character Props

PropCharacterScenesDetailsSource
Book of LifeLife2–7Large weathered leather journal. Tea-stained pages, handwritten Setswana text. Life reads from it, holds it to chest.buy + age critical
Prop knife ×2Death, Life8–10Ritualistic look. Bone/wood handle. One for Death (at belt), one for Life (lunges). NOT real blades.build critical
Soul CatcherDeath10Death opens it to collect the soul. Carved wooden box with clasp, OR leather pouch with symbols.build critical
Bone-white dieBoth8–9Single oversized die (25–30mm). Must read "1" on camera when it lands.buy
Clay pot (small)DeathAll roomTraditional Botswana terracotta. Sits on table. Falls in Sc.10.buy
Whiskey + glassDeath1–2Dark bottle + tumbler. Amber liquid (use tea). Establishes Death's casual ownership.buy
CigaretteDeath → Person2Death gives Person a cigarette. Must produce smoke. Use herbal/prop cigarettes.buy
Baby photoPerson1Small framed photo. Person looks at it reflecting on life.buy
Black coffin7Full-size. Woman lies in it. Death kneels beside it.rent critical
Stage bloodLife10Hands, blade. Test color on skin under amber light.buy/make
Bread / crumbsLadyParkLady feeds birds.day-of

๐Ÿ‘” Costumes — 5 characters

DEATH — Angel of Death

  • Earth-toned linen tunic + trousers. Loose, timeless โ€” not modern, not historical. Muted brown/ochre/sand.
  • Sandals or bare feet (feet on table in Sc.2)
  • Knife at belt/side. No jewelry.
  • Hair: greying, close-cropped, stubble

buy 3m linen fabric at market. Can sew simply or find matching separates.

LIFE — Angel of Life

  • Earth-toned linen dress/wrap. Same palette as Death (twins). Natural, mythical feel.
  • Patterned headwrap — her signature piece. Warm earth-tone patterns. NOT bright Ankara — think aged, mythical.
  • Book of Life always in hand or at chest
  • Bare feet or simple sandals

buy 3m linen + 1.5m patterned fabric for headwrap. Practice wrapping before shoot.

PERSON

  • Dark t-shirt (black/dark grey, plain, no logos) + blue jeans
  • Sneakers. Zero accessories.
  • Deliberately ordinary — a human among angels.

Actor may already own. Confirm: no visible branding.

LADY / WOMAN

  • Park: Simple housedress, light cardigan, or traditional Setswana dress. Soft colors โ€” cream, light blue, muted.
  • Coffin (Sc.7): Same outfit or white/cream burial garment if Lady = Woman.
  • Bread in a cloth wrap or small bag.

๐Ÿ’„ Makeup & Hair — 3 key challenges

โš  Three critical makeup moments: (1) Lady's progressive aging as Death approaches, (2) Blood on Life's hands after the killing (Sc.10), (3) Death's aged/greying look if actor is younger.

๐Ÿ”ด LADY โ€” Aging Effect hardest

Script: "Every step Death takes it gets darker and Lady gets old." She ages visibly as Death approaches.

Needs: Stipple latex, age spot paint, grey hair spray, wrinkle pencils. Test on actress before shoot day.

๐Ÿ”ด LIFE โ€” Blood Hands (Sc.10)

Climax visual. Stage blood on both hands + forearms + blade. Must look visceral under warm amber light.

Test: Blood color on actor's skin tone under warm light before shoot. Corn syrup + red food coloring + touch of cocoa powder = film-grade DIY blood.

DEATH โ€” Aged Look

Greying stubble (stipple + grey spray if actor is young). Crow's feet around eyes. Weathered but timeless โ€” not decrepit.

Consistent throughout all scenes.

PERSON โ€” Natural

Young, tired. Subtle dark circles. Dry lips. Traumatized look for flashback (Sc.2): slightly paler, hollow cheeks.

LIFE โ€” Sweat Effect

Glycerin drops for controlled sweat beads at temples during intense scenes (KF06). Simple and effective.

๐ŸŽฌ Scene-by-Scene Checklist

SceneLocCastPropsCostumeMakeup
1RoomDeath, PersonTable, chairs, bulb, baby photo, whiskey, hazeDeath: linen. Person: tee+jeansDeath: aged. Person: tired.
2RoomDeath, Person, Life+ Cigarette, Book of Life+ Life enters: linen + headwrap+ Life: fierce, clean
3RoomDeath, Life, PersonBook of LifeSameSame
4RoomDeath, Life, PersonBook of Life (Life reads)SameSame
5RoomDeath, Life, PersonBook of LifeSameSame
6RoomDeath, Life, PersonSame. Death exits.Same
7Ext HouseDeath, Life, WomanCoffin, Book of LifeWoman: burial. D+L: linen.Woman: deceased. Life strangles Death
8RoomDeath, Life, ThirdTable, 3 chairs, die, knife, clay potThird: contemporaryThird: nervous/sweating
9RoomDeath, Life, ThirdDie (rolling ×6)SameSame
10RoomDeath, Life, ThirdKnife ×2, Soul Catcher, bloodSameBLOOD on Life's hands
Park AParkDeath, LadyBench, bread/crumbsLady: gentle outfitAging progression
IntRoom?Death, LifeSame linenSame
Park BParkDeath, Life, LadyBench, breadSameAging continues

๐Ÿ›’ Shopping & Sourcing

Buy

ItemEst. BWPPriorityWhere
Edison filament bulb + 2m wire80–150criticalHardware (Game, Builders)
Linen fabric 6m (costumes)200–400criticalFabric market / Main Mall
Patterned fabric 1.5m (headwrap)60–120criticalFabric market
Large leather journal (Book of Life)150–300criticalCraft shop / Takealot
Stage blood 500ml80–120criticalPharmacy or DIY: corn syrup + red dye + cocoa
Prop knives ×260–150criticalToy shop or carve wood + paint
White die (oversized)30–60highGame shop / craft
Grey hair spray + aging kit120–230highBeauty supply
Glycerin spray30–50mediumPharmacy
Herbal cigarettes ×240–80mediumHealth shop
Small clay pot30–60mediumStreet market / craft vendor
Whiskey bottle + tumbler40–80mediumAny shop / reuse
Photo frame + print20–40mediumPrint shop
Incense / haze50–100mediumSpiritual shop / event rental

Rent / Borrow

ItemSourcePriority
Black coffinFuneral home / coffin maker — arrange Mon/Tuecritical
Heavy wooden tableCarpenter workshop / UB maintenancecritical
3 wooden chairsUB / restaurant / localhigh
Haze machineEvent equipment rentalmedium

Build / Make

ItemMethodAssign to
Soul CatcherCarved wooden box + metal clasp, or leather pouch with symbolsAobakwe (9/10, set design)
Book of Life — agingTea-stain pages, burn edges, handwritten Setswana textArt dept
Linen costumesSimple tunic sewing if not found ready-madeZakotoka (costume+makeup)

๐Ÿ‘ฅ Recommended Crew

DOP

Mohau (10/10)
Since 2013. TV & film. Sicario.

B-Cam

Dimpho (9/10)
EEAAO. Flexible.

Sound

Lame (10/10)
Boom + post. 4 NLEs.

Costume & Makeup

Zakotoka (6/10)
Cin + costume. Apocalypto.

Set Design & Props

Aobakwe (9/10)
Film school. Prod + set.

Edit & VFX

Constantine (10/10)
7 tools. 15yr. Blender/AE.

Score

Malebogo (10/10)
Composer. Sibelius. Lifelong.

VFX Backup

TaboNa (8/10)
3D animation. For aging FX.

AD / Producer

Faith (8.5/10)
Producer. Takes responsibility.

โ“ Open Questions for Katamelo

1. Life โ€” Who plays her?

Tebogo Reteng is listed for both Death AND Life. They share every scene. Life is written as female ("sister"). Need a second actor for Life ASAP.

2. Lady = Woman in coffin?

Are the Lady (park bench, final scenes) and the Woman (coffin, Sc.7) the same character? Affects casting, costume, and makeup plan.

3. Third Person โ€” Uncast

The dice-game victim. Small but important role (Sc.8–10). Could pull from the 20 interested actors.

4. Flashback โ€” How literal?

Sc.2: "We go through a flashback of their life." Full location shoot or abstract impressionistic cuts in the same room?

5. Soul Catcher โ€” What does it look like?

Box? Pouch? Vessel? Glass orb? Needs to be built this week โ€” design decision needed today.

6. Lady aging โ€” Practical or VFX?

Recommend practical (3-stage makeup passes cut together). But if time is tight, VFX is fallback.

7. Shoot schedule

Suggested: Day 1: All Room scenes (1–6, 8–10) โ€” single location, same cast. Day 2: Park scenes + Coffin exterior. Maximizes efficiency.